Ok except for the color I am pretty darn happy with this one as well! I think I am on to something...

Conte Crayons Red and Orange blended on white sketching paper. Then yellow for the plage and 4B lead pencil for darker areas (blended) and for the spots themselves... now to practice... and figure out the correct Ha Color.... Yeah and the darker areas are a little too dark... I'll work on that as well... still...