... I received the daystar filter today, ...
The film filters are often wrinkly, they shouldn't be pulled taunt as that can introduce distortions nor should they be creased. (They're thin enough wrinkles don't affect the image.)
As for the photos, I'm not sure you are focused perfectly.
A quick websearch says your lens is f/6.3 at 270mm, that is about 43mm diameter. Plus there are all the extra elements to make it zoom. So you may be pushing what that lens can resolve. (I'm sure experts will be along to offer more experienced opinions on this.)
The solar film itself might not be the absolute sharpest, but if it is Thousand Oaks Solarlite, as implied in the listing, it should be very close to as good as possible. Shoddy cardboard mounting cell shouldn't affect the image, just the long term durability of the holder -- as long as it is secure as you use it.
Something you aren't considering and can have considerable effects on the sharpness of your image is daytime seeing normally... isn't very good.
Before changing equipment, I'd get more practice in. Make sure you nail the focus and consider the seeing carefully, only if / once you are convinced you are maximizing what you've got would I look to changing the equipment.
ETA: I am visual only. Your photos are not as detailed as I see with my cheap 60mm (400mm fl) refractor using a cheap Rainbow Symphony black polymer filter. Your film should be a step, or more, better than mine. While I should have somewhat better optical resolution than your lens and I suspect focusing for visual is significantly easier than it is for the camera, I would expect better results with what you have now.
Edited by SporadicGazer, 20 February 2024 - 12:54 PM.