Mbenj2405, I am glad to see you are stepping into the double pass world.
And a good start too! The scope certainly seems quite well corrected spherically and color wise.
If I may, some suggestions.
Purchase a "warmer" white LED. The white image you show is very "blue heavy" and seems to be saturating the sensor in the blue causing considerable blooming. You can see that if you separate out the RGB channels in monochrome. But also decrease the overall exposure and, if you can, get into the camera's menu and set the color balance for warm as you can, set your ISO as low as you can and experiment a bunch. Also, use image stabilization if you have it.
I looked at the Applied Image site and the Ronchi screens seem to be of excellent quality.
If I'm reading the site right, your current screen frequency is ~65 lines per inch (LPI), which, if correct, is low. You will, as you have done here, get a good idea or what's going on, but the resolution is low. The 5.0 screen is close to the 133 LPI "standard" and will show you considerably more, especially at focus.
And "fat fingered" at the edge in the outside of focus images are "normal", especially below F8. You may have noticed that the "outside" images are more difficult to take and their contrast is higher than those taken "inside".
What does a high power star test tell you, especially with a green filter?
Well done and keep testing!
Jeff